Date: Sat, 4 May 2002 22:47:33 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/37756: Various punctuation problems in section 2.5.1 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205042047.g44KlXBf087334@gothic.blackend.org>
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>Number: 37756 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Various punctuation problems in section 2.5.1 of the Handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat May 04 14:00:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386 >Description: Various punctuation problems in section 2.5.1 of the Handbook: look at the patch below for more details. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the following patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Sat May 4 22:24:52 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Sat May 4 22:24:24 2002 @@ -1436,12 +1436,12 @@ decide that it is time for a new adventure -- time to upgrade to a newer version of FreeBSD. Bill removes SCSI unit zero because it was a bit flaky and replaces it with another identical disk drive from - the <quote>archive.</quote> Bill then installs the new version of FreeBSD onto the + the <quote>archive</quote>. Bill then installs the new version of FreeBSD onto the new SCSI unit zero using Fred's magic Internet FTP floppies. The installation goes well.</para> <para>Fred uses the new version of FreeBSD for a few days, and certifies - that it is good enough for use in the engineering department...it is + that it is good enough for use in the engineering department... It is time to copy all of his work from the old version. So Fred mounts SCSI unit four (the latest copy of the older FreeBSD version). Fred is dismayed to find that none of his precious work is present on SCSI @@ -1450,7 +1450,7 @@ <para>Where did the data go?</para> <para>When Bill made an image copy of the original SCSI unit zero onto - SCSI unit four, unit four became the <quote>new clone,</quote> + SCSI unit four, unit four became the <quote>new clone</quote>. When Bill re-ordered the SCSI BIOS so that he could boot from SCSI unit four, he was only fooling himself. FreeBSD was still running on SCSI unit zero. --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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