Date: Mon, 24 Dec 2012 22:08:11 +0000 (UTC) From: Benjamin Kaduk <bjk@freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: confusing sentence in hardware notes boilerplate Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1212242202380.95209@freefall.freebsd.org>
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I was going over the various release notes documents to do some editing,
and spent entirely too much time trying to understand a sentence at the
top of the hardware notes, which has been there since r172098 by bmah in
2007. I think that adding a word per below helps the readability, but I
am no longer an impartial reader (having read the sentence too much).
Thoughts?
-Ben
Index: article.xml
===================================================================
--- article.xml (revision 244663)
+++ article.xml (working copy)
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
<para>This document contains the hardware compatibility notes for
&os; &release.current;. It lists the hardware platforms
supported by &os;, as well as the various types of hardware
- devices (storage controllers, network interfaces, and so on),
+ devices supported (storage controllers, network interfaces, and so on),
along with known working instances of these devices.</para>
</sect1>
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