Date: Thu, 18 Sep 2008 10:06:44 +0200 From: Pav Lucistnik <pav@FreeBSD.org> To: remko@elvandar.org Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml Message-ID: <1221725204.12231.11.camel@pav.hide.vol.cz> In-Reply-To: <547c26a640ad3b055f1117110042d3ea.squirrel@galain.elvandar.org> References: <200809180733.m8I7XNuQ079789@repoman.freebsd.org> <547c26a640ad3b055f1117110042d3ea.squirrel@galain.elvandar.org>
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Remko Lodder píše v čt 18. 09. 2008 v 09:38 +0200:
> > pav 2008-09-18 07:33:23 UTC
> >
> > FreeBSD doc repository
> >
> > Modified files:
> > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
> > chapter.sgml
> > Log:
> > In Bluetooth section, reflect there is now a regular rc script
> >
> > Revision Changes Path
> > 1.414 +3 -5
> > doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
> >
>
> You and I had almost the same change:
>
> <<<<<<< chapter.sgml
> <para>The <filename>/etc/rc.d/bluetooth</filename> is used to
> start and stop the Bluetooth stack. It is a good
> =======
> <para>The <filename>/etc/rc.d/bluetooth</filename> script
> is used to start and stop the Bluetooth stack. It is a good
> >>>>>>> 1.414
>
>
> I would suggest adding "script" or "file" after the <filename> because
> that defines the "The /etc/rc.d/bluetooth" as either a file or script :)
I would suggest that too. In fact, I actually used the word 'script'
there. So... what's up, doc? :)
--
Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz>
<pav@FreeBSD.org>
> Why do we need a film of "Lord of the Rings" when we have the book?
Because watching a cg enhanced Legolas fire a flaming arrow
into the heart of a warg is cool?
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