Date: Mon, 4 Jun 2012 16:18:30 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r38983 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config Message-ID: <201206041618.q54GIUhT051959@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Mon Jun 4 16:18:30 2012 New Revision: 38983 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/38983 Log: Fix a comma splice by making two separate (shorter) sentences out of a long one. Submitted by: bjk Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Mon Jun 4 16:08:25 2012 (r38982) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml Mon Jun 4 16:18:30 2012 (r38983) @@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 n <para>System logging is an important aspect of system administration. It is used both to detect hardware and software - issues and errors in the system, it also plays a very + issues and errors in the system. It also plays a very important role in security auditing and incident response. System daemons without a controlling terminal also usually log information to a system logging facility or other log
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