Date: Sun, 21 Oct 2001 12:30:01 -0700 (PDT) From: Salvo Bartolotta <bartequi@neomedia.it> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/31412: [PATCH] Minor modifications to cvsup-advanced article Message-ID: <200110211930.f9LJU1l70217@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/31412; it has been noted by GNATS.
From: Salvo Bartolotta <bartequi@neomedia.it>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Cc:
Subject: Re: docs/31412: [PATCH] Minor modifications to cvsup-advanced article
Date: Sun, 21 Oct 2001 21:21:09 +0200 (CEST)
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Originator: Salvo Bartolotta
>Organization: none of importance
>Confidential: no
>Synopsis: [PATCH] Minor modifications to cvsup-advanced article
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Category: docs
>Class: doc-bug
>Release: FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE i386
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE #0: Sat Sep 29 12:25:01 CEST 2001
>Description:
There are minor format problems (certain commands/instructions should stay on
one single line; I gather that "information identifying your 4-STABLE sources"
sounds better than "identification information on your 4-STABLE sources"
(somewhat clumsy).
>How-To-Repeat:
Read the aforementioned article. :-)
>Fix:
[ Resent *sigh* ] The patch follows below (No MIME this time).
===================================================================
RCS file:
/myjunk/home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/cvsup-advanced/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.2 article.sgml
--- article.sgml 2001/10/15 13:21:52 1.2
+++ article.sgml 2001/10/21 18:26:23
@@ -115,13 +115,11 @@
python and updating your sources (eg <filename>/usr/ports</filename>),
you can check them thus:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.user;
<filename>/path/to/</filename><userinput>cvsupchk
--d /usr -c /usr/sup/ports-all/checkouts.cvs:. | more</userinput></screen>
+ <screen>&prompt.user;
<filename>/path/to/</filename><userinput>cvsupchk -d /usr -c
/usr/sup/ports-all/checkouts.cvs:. | more</userinput></screen>
<para>If you want to check your RELENG_4 sources:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.user;
<filename>/path/to/</filename><userinput>cvsupchk
--d /usr -c /usr/sup/src-all/checkouts.cvs:RELENG_4 | more</userinput></screen>
+ <screen>&prompt.user;
<filename>/path/to/</filename><userinput>cvsupchk -d /usr -c
/usr/sup/src-all/checkouts.cvs:RELENG_4 | more</userinput></screen>
<para>In each case, cvsupchk will inspect your sources for
inconsistencies by utilizing the information contained in the
@@ -146,8 +144,8 @@
a checkouts file called <filename>checkouts.cvs:A</filename>:
for instance, if tag=RELENG_4, a checkouts file called
<filename>checkouts.cvs:RELENG_4</filename> is generated.
- This file will be used to retrieve and/or store identification
- information on your 4-STABLE sources.</para>
+ This file will be used to retrieve and/or store information
+ identifying your 4-STABLE sources.</para>
<para>When tracking <literal>src-all</literal>, if you wish to
pass from tag=A to tag=B (A less/greater than B not making
@@ -226,15 +224,14 @@
you write the line:</para>
- <programlisting>src-all tag=RELENG_4
-date=2000.08.27.10.00.00</programlisting>
+ <programlisting>src-all tag=RELENG_4
date=2000.08.27.10.00.00</programlisting>
- <para>N.B. The format of a date is rigid. You have to specify
+ <note><para>The format of a date is rigid. You have to specify
all the components of the date: century (20, ie the 20th
century, must be supplied whereas 19, the past century, can
be omitted), year, month, day, hour, minutes, seconds -- as
shown in the above example. For more information, please
- see &man.cvsup.1;.</para>
+ see &man.cvsup.1;.</para></note>
<para>Whether or not a date is specified, the checkouts file
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