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Date:      Fri, 15 Mar 2013 14:51:23 -0400 (EDT)
From:      Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
To:        Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r41234 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq
Message-ID:  <alpine.GSO.1.10.1303151449550.9389@multics.mit.edu>
In-Reply-To: <201303151749.r2FHnQrh006712@svn.freebsd.org>
References:  <201303151749.r2FHnQrh006712@svn.freebsd.org>

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On Fri, 15 Mar 2013, Eitan Adler wrote:

> Author: eadler
> Date: Fri Mar 15 17:49:26 2013
> New Revision: 41234
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41234
>
> Log:
>  Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the
>  abstract.  Simplify some of the text from both sections.
>
>  Reviewed by:	doc

It was "silence on -doc", unless 
http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc/2013-March/021639.html saw 
some reply that is not appearing...

(I looked at the patch but did not have particular thoughts about it.)

-Ben

>  Approved by:	jkois (mentor)



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