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Date:      Wed, 31 Mar 2021 11:19:29 GMT
From:      Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-all@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-main@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   git: 646bae45e102 - main - fortune/freebsd-tips: Fix markup and wording
Message-ID:  <202103311119.12VBJTRO090496@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

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The branch main has been updated by debdrup (doc committer):

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=646bae45e102df9fad5a1efa84b4c31f0e26d2cb

commit 646bae45e102df9fad5a1efa84b4c31f0e26d2cb
Author:     Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2021-03-31 11:10:30 +0000
Commit:     Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2021-03-31 11:10:30 +0000

    fortune/freebsd-tips: Fix markup and wording
    
    'ps' is not a word - rather, it is a utility with its own manual page.
    As every other utility referenced in the file has it, append the
    relevant manual section that ps(1) can be found in.
    
    While here, also wordsmith a sentence to avoid awkward phrasing, and fix
    a typo.
    
    Pointy hat to:  me
    Reported by:    danfe, brueffer, maxim
---
 usr.bin/fortune/datfiles/freebsd-tips | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/usr.bin/fortune/datfiles/freebsd-tips b/usr.bin/fortune/datfiles/freebsd-tips
index 2a37f98a37e5..0b596dec4575 100644
--- a/usr.bin/fortune/datfiles/freebsd-tips
+++ b/usr.bin/fortune/datfiles/freebsd-tips
@@ -803,14 +803,14 @@ You can spot one like this:
 
 		-- Alan Somers <asomers@FreeBSD.org>
 %
-FreeBSDs ps can create a dependency tree based on parent/child relationships
-between processes, like this:
+FreeBSD's ps(1) can create a dependency tree based on parent/child
+relationships between processes, like this:
 
 $ ps -d
 
 		-- Daniel Ebdrup Jensen <debdrup@FreeBSD.org>
 %
-It is possible to get a meassure of the resident memory set:
+It is possible to measure the resident memory set:
 
 $ vmstat -o | awk 'NR>1 { t[$7] += $1 } \
 END { for (i in t) printf "%s %d\n",i,t[i] }'



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