Date: Wed, 18 Jul 2007 12:00:51 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org> To: Chin-San Huang <chinsan@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml Message-ID: <20070718100051.GA25767@abigail.blackend.org> In-Reply-To: <200707171737.l6HHbAWr050628@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200707171737.l6HHbAWr050628@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Tue, Jul 17, 2007 at 05:37:10PM +0000, Chin-San Huang wrote: > chinsan 2007-07-17 17:37:10 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml > Log: > - Remove 4.X related stuff. > - Update the info about hard drives whcich supported by FreeBSD. > > Revision Changes Path > 1.800 +8 -8 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml > > http://cvsweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml.diff?r1=1.799&r2=1.800 > | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml 2007/07/08 09:46:14 1.799 > | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml 2007/07/17 17:37:09 1.800 > | @@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ > | > | <book> > | <bookinfo> > | - <title>Frequently Asked Questions for FreeBSD 4.X, 5.X, and 6.X</title> > | + <title>Frequently Asked Questions for FreeBSD 5.X, and 6.X</title> > | > | <corpauthor>The FreeBSD Documentation Project</corpauthor> > | > | - <pubdate>$FreeBSD: /usr/local/www/cvsroot/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v 1.799 2007/07/08 09:46:14 chinsan Exp $</pubdate> > | + <pubdate>$FreeBSD: /usr/local/www/cvsroot/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v 1.800 2007/07/17 17:37:09 chinsan Exp $</pubdate> > | > | <copyright> > | <year>1995</year> > | @@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ > | </legalnotice> > | > | <abstract> > | - <para>This is the FAQ for FreeBSD versions 4.X, 5.X, and 6.X. > | - All entries are assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 4.0 and > | + <para>This is the FAQ for FreeBSD versions 5.X, and 6.X. > | + All entries are assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 5.X and > | later, unless otherwise noted. If you are interested in > | helping with this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The > | latest version of this document is always available from the > | @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ > | <chapter id="introduction"> > | <title>Introduction</title> > | > | - <para>Welcome to the FreeBSD 4.X-6.X FAQ!</para> > | + <para>Welcome to the FreeBSD 5.X-6.X FAQ!</para> > | > | <para>As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the > | most frequently asked questions concerning the FreeBSD operating > | @@ -2210,9 +2210,9 @@ File: +DESC (ignored)</screen> > | </question> > | > | <answer> > | - <para>FreeBSD supports EIDE and SCSI drives (with a compatible > | - controller; see the next section), and all drives using the > | - original <quote>Western Digital</quote> interface (MFM, RLL, > | + <para>FreeBSD supports EIDE, SATA, SCSI, and SAS drives (with a > | + compatible controller; see the next section), and all drives using > | + the original <quote>Western Digital</quote> interface (MFM, RLL, > | ESDI, and of course IDE). A few ESDI controllers that use Hello, I noted you often do useless (and confusing for the translators) line-wrappings (or what we call "mixing whitespaces and content changes"). In the example above, only one line was really modified and finally we end with three modified lines. I let you imagine the "headaches" for a translator or any other person trying to figure out what was really modified. Just to sum up: we mustn't mix content and whitespaces/linewrapping/layout changes. -- Marc
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