Date: Sun, 4 Jan 2004 13:21:14 +0100 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> To: Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira <lioux@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/trademarks.sgml small fix Message-ID: <20040104122108.GA670@arthur.nitro.dk> In-Reply-To: <20031212021612.86072.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> References: <20031212021612.86072.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On 2003.12.12 00:16:12 -0159, Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira wrote: > Small uniformization. Should we always use a comma > after Inc. or not at all? I know it is minor and I should probably > decide myself but I rather ask then be sorry. > > Attached is a patch that show the change. If the decision > is that a comma should not follow, I'll remove some in the same > file. Sorry about the late reply, I was rather busy in December. In general I have just copy/pasted the trademark attribution from whatever each company had on their website. Therefor I think they should be left as they are, unless somebody with better English grammar skills than me can positively say if the commas should be there or not. > --- en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/trademarks.sgml.orig Thu Dec 11 23:58:50 2003 > +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/trademarks.sgml Thu Dec 11 23:59:31 2003 > @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ > other countries.</para> > > <para>Sun, Sun Microsystems, SunOS, Solaris, and Java are trademarks > - or registered trademarks of Sun Microsystems, Inc. in the United > + or registered trademarks of Sun Microsystems, Inc., in the United > States and other countries.</para> > > <!-- Product Trademarks --> > @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ > registered in the U.S. and other countries.</para> > > <para>Macromedia and Flash are trademarks or registered > - trademarks of Macromedia, Inc. in the United States and/or other > + trademarks of Macromedia, Inc., in the United States and/or other > countries.</para> > > <para>Microsoft, Windows, and Windows Media are either registered -- Simon L. Nielsen FreeBSD Documentation Team [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/+AU0h9pcDSc1mlERAk8TAJ9ELlEKXXXAwxPyL3q1G8i2LBYb2gCfTKN0 nQcYtt6SkrMeeFLlmzeqTHA= =xMMd -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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