Date: Mon, 26 Mar 2012 16:42:26 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml Message-ID: <201203261642.q2QGgQ16026326@repoman.freebsd.org>
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eadler 2012-03-26 16:42:26 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml
Log:
Rewrite the config chapter to be more clear and use professional language.
PR: docs/164920
Submitted by: Niclas Zeising <zeising@daemonic.se>
Reviewed by: gjb (older version)
Approved by: bcr
Revision Changes Path
1.252 +50 -26 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
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