Date: Wed, 19 Sep 2001 17:37:20 -0700 (PDT) From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200109200037.f8K0bL863857@freefall.freebsd.org>
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chern 2001/09/19 17:37:20 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
Log:
* Grammar nit changes
* Reworded sentences for consistency/understandability
* Consistency/Standardization changes
* Minor markup changes, placing items in <devicename>, and so forth
* Revising constant usage of ie
* Used generic Example.EDU in examples
Revision Changes Path
1.60 +147 -122 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
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