Date: Mon, 11 Aug 2003 23:17:10 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200308120617.h7C6HACT013518@repoman.freebsd.org>
next in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
murray 2003/08/11 23:17:10 PDT
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard chapter.sgml
Log:
Another pass.
Markup fixes :
* </programlisting> should end without a newline.
* More <filename> markup.
* Add <structname>, <function>, <replaceable>, <acronym>, <quote> tags.
* Move <programlistings> outside of <para>s.
Grammar fixes :
* Add missing words, where needed.
* Remove superfluous words.
* Shorten several redundant sentences of the form
'Also, .... , as well.'
Revision Changes Path
1.7 +71 -65 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/pccard/chapter.sgml
Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?200308120617.h7C6HACT013518>