Date: Thu, 19 Aug 2010 02:53:23 GMT From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/149790: [patch][handbook] Chapter 7 Multimedia: Minor grammatical fixes Message-ID: <201008190253.o7J2rNa3044300@www.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <201008190300.o7J30Esg097626@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 149790
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch][handbook] Chapter 7 Multimedia: Minor grammatical fixes
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Thu Aug 19 03:00:13 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Glen Barber
>Release: 8.1-PRERELEASE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.1-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 8.1-PRERELEASE #3 r210428: Sat Jul 24 13:37:37 EDT 2010 root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION amd64
>Description:
Minor grammatical fixes for the Multimedia chapter.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml.orig 2009-09-29 11:06:13.000000000 -0400
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml 2010-08-18 22:42:49.312202902 -0400
@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@
effects, and control attached MIDI devices.</para>
<para>With some experimentation, &os; can support
- playback of video files and DVD's. The number of applications
+ playback of video files and DVDs. The number of applications
to encode, convert, and playback various video media is more
limited than the number of sound applications. For example as
- of this writing, there is no good re-encoding application in the
+ of this writing, there are no good re-encoding applications in the
FreeBSD Ports Collection that could be used to convert
between formats, as there is with <filename
role="package">audio/sox</filename>. However, the software
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>How to playback DVD's, <filename>.mpg</filename> and
+ <para>How to playback DVDs, <filename>.mpg</filename> and
<filename>.avi</filename> files.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1185,7 +1185,7 @@
usable, but a bit clumsy.</para>
<para>As of this writing, there is no input module shipped with
- <application>xine</application> which will play CSS encoded DVD's. There are third party
+ <application>xine</application> which will play CSS encoded DVDs. There are third party
builds which do have modules for this built in them, but none
of these are in the FreeBSD Ports Collection.</para>
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