Date: Wed, 25 Mar 1998 16:07:35 +0000 From: nik@iii.co.uk To: Sean Kelly <kelly@plutotech.com> Cc: doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: [REVIEW] Changes to the DocProj web pages Message-ID: <19980325160735.58464@iii.co.uk> In-Reply-To: <35192AB1.43F399D@plutotech.com>; from Sean Kelly on Wed, Mar 25, 1998 at 09:02:57AM -0700 References: <19980325110053.21549@iii.co.uk> <35192AB1.43F399D@plutotech.com>
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On Wed, Mar 25, 1998 at 09:02:57AM -0700, Sean Kelly wrote: > The only nits I have to pick are comprised of punctuation errors and > typos: On the `docproj' page, the second paragraph uses "it's" when it > should be "its". (The paragraph after that one gets it right.) > > On the `current' page, the third paragraph should read "whose" instead > of "who's". Noted. I'll fix them this evening. > On the `sgml' page, why is the emphasis for `not' in the fourth > paragpraph rendered as ``*not*'' instead of using italics or bold? <guffaw> Sorry 'bout that. The content of those files was originally one long e-mail that I sent out to someone a day or so ago. I thought I'd caught all of those. > On the `submitting' page, change "how" in the third paragraph (``You > should probably...'') to "who". Damn. Thought I'd got those ones as well. All noted. Thanks for the feedback so far folks. N -- Work: nik@iii.co.uk | FreeBSD + Perl + Apache Rest: nik@nothing-going-on.demon.co.uk | Remind me again why we need Play: nik@freebsd.org | Microsoft? To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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