Date: Wed, 21 May 2014 17:52:23 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44901 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <201405211752.s4LHqNJi029044@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Wed May 21 17:52:23 2014 New Revision: 44901 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44901 Log: Editorial review of Allocating Disk Space and Committing to the Install sections. Ignore Designing the Partition Layout for now as it belongs elsewhere. Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed May 21 15:17:21 2014 (r44900) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed May 21 17:52:23 2014 (r44901) @@ -891,9 +891,9 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <para>This section shows the order of the <application>bsdinstall</application> menus and the type of information that will be asked before the system is installed. - Use the up and down arrows to highlight a menu option, then the - <keycap>Space</keycap> key to select or deselect a menu item. - Then, use <keycap>Enter</keycap> to save the selection and move + Use the arrow keys to highlight a menu option, then the + <keycap>Space</keycap> key to select or deselect that menu item. + When finished, use <keycap>Enter</keycap> to save the selection and move onto the next screen.</para> <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-keymap"> @@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <para>Deciding which components to install will depend largely on the intended use of the system and the amount of disk space available. The &os; kernel and userland, collectively known - as the <quote>base system</quote>, are always installed. + as the <firstterm>base system</firstterm>, are always installed. Depending on the architecture, some of these components may not appear:</para> @@ -1036,15 +1036,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <listitem> <para><literal>ports</literal> - The &os; Ports - Collection.</para> - - <para>The ports collection is an easy and convenient way to - install software. The Ports Collection does not contain - the source code necessary to compile the software. - Instead, it is a collection of files which automates the + Collection is a collection of files which automates the downloading, compiling and installation of third-party software packages. <xref linkend="ports"/> discusses how - to use the ports collection.</para> + to use the Ports Collection.</para> <warning> <para>The installation program does not check for @@ -1056,30 +1051,29 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </listitem> <listitem> - <para><literal>src</literal> - System source code.</para> - - <para>&os; comes with full source code for both the kernel + <para><literal>src</literal> - The complete &os; source code for both the kernel and the userland. Although not required for the majority - of applications, it may be required to build certain - software supplied as source (for example, device drivers - or kernel modules), or for developing &os; itself.</para> - - <para>The full source tree requires 1 GB of disk space, + of applications, it may be required to build + device drivers, kernel modules, or some applications from + the Ports Collection. It is also used for developing &os; + itself. The full source tree requires 1 GB of disk space and recompiling the entire &os; system requires an additional 5 GB of space.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> </sect2> - </sect1> - <sect1 xml:id="bsdinstall-netinstall"> + <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-netinstall"> <title>Installing from the Network</title> - <para>The <emphasis>bootonly</emphasis> installation media does - not hold copies of the installation files. When a - <emphasis>bootonly</emphasis> installation method is used, the - files must be retrieved over a network connection as they are - needed.</para> + <para>The menu shown in <xref + linkend="bsdinstall-netinstall-notify"/> only appears when + installing from a <filename>-bootonly.iso</filename> + <acronym>CD</acronym> as this installation media does + not hold copies of the installation files. Since the installation + files must be retrieved over a network connection, this menu + indicates that the network interface must be first + configured.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-netinstall-notify"> <title>Installing from the Network</title> @@ -1092,13 +1086,14 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>After the network connection has been configured as shown in - <xref linkend="bsdinstall-config-network-dev"/>, a mirror site - is selected. Mirror sites cache copies of the &os; files. - Choose a mirror site located in the same region of the world as + <para>To configure the network connection, press + <keycap>Enter</keycap> and follow the instructions in + <xref linkend="bsdinstall-config-network-dev"/>. Once the + interface is configured, select a mirror site that is + located in the same region of the world as the computer on which &os; is being installed. Files can be retrieved more quickly when the mirror is close to the target - computer, and installation time will be reduced.</para> + computer, reducing installation time.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-netinstall-mirror"> <title>Choosing a Mirror</title> @@ -1111,26 +1106,20 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Installation will continue as if the installation files - were located on local media.</para> + <para>Installation will then continue as if the installation files + were located on the local installation media.</para> + </sect2> </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="bsdinstall-partitioning"> <title>Allocating Disk Space</title> - <para>There are four ways to allocate disk space for &os;. - <emphasis>Guided</emphasis> partitioning automatically sets up - disk partitions, while <emphasis>Manual</emphasis> partitioning - allows advanced users to create customized partitions. The - <acronym>ZFS</acronym> option, only available in &os; 10 and - later, will create an optionally encrypted root-on-ZFS system - with support for Boot Environments. Finally, there's the option - of starting a shell where command-line programs like - &man.gpart.8;, &man.fdisk.8;, and &man.bsdlabel.8; can be used - directly.</para> + <para>The next menu is used to determine the method for + allocating disk space. The options available in the menu + depend upon the version of &os; being installed.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-part-guided-manual"> - <title>Selecting Guided, Manual or Shell Partitioning</title> + <title>Partitioning Choices on &os; 9.x</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> @@ -1141,8 +1130,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </figure> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-zfs-partmenu"> - <title>Selecting Guided, Manual, Shell or - <acronym>ZFS</acronym> Partitioning</title> + <title>Partitioning Choices on &os; 10.x and Higher</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> @@ -1151,9 +1139,19 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> + <para><literal>Guided</literal> partitioning automatically sets up + the disk partitions, <literal>Manual</literal> partitioning + allows advanced users to create customized partitions from menu + options, and <literal>Shell</literal> opens a shell prompt where + advanced users can create customized partitions using + command-line utilities like &man.gpart.8;, &man.fdisk.8;, and &man.bsdlabel.8;. + <literal>ZFS</literal> partitioning, only available in &os; 10 and + later, creates an optionally encrypted root-on-ZFS system + with support for <firstterm>boot environments</firstterm>.</para> + <para>This section describes what to consider when laying out the - disk partitions. It then demonstrates how to use both the - Guided Partitioning and Manual Partitioning screens.</para> + disk partitions. It then demonstrates how to use the different + partitioning methods.</para> <sect2 xml:id="configtuning-initial"> <title>Designing the Partition Layout</title> @@ -1252,7 +1250,8 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-part-guided"> <title>Guided Partitioning</title> - <para>If multiple disks are connected, choose the one where &os; + <para>When this method is selected, a menu will display the + available disk(s). If multiple disks are connected, choose the one where &os; is to be installed.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-part-guided-disk"> @@ -1266,13 +1265,14 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>The entire disk or a portion of it can be allocated to - &os;. If + <para>Once the disk is selected, the next menu prompts to install + to either the entire disk or to create a partition using free space. + If <guibutton>[ Entire Disk ]</guibutton> is chosen, a general partition layout filling the whole disk is - created. Selecting + automatically created. Selecting <guibutton>[ Partition ]</guibutton> creates a - partition layout in unused space on the disk.</para> + partition layout from the unused space on the disk.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-part-entire-part"> <title>Selecting Entire Disk or Partition</title> @@ -1285,12 +1285,12 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>After the partition layout has been created, review it - carefully for accuracy. If a mistake has been made, selecting + <para>After the partition layout has been created, review it to + ensure it meets the needs of the installation. Selecting <guibutton>[ Revert ]</guibutton> will reset the - partitions as they were previously, or + partitions to their original values and pressing <guibutton>[ Auto ]</guibutton> will recreate the - automatic &os; partitions. Partitions can be manually + automatic &os; partitions. Partitions can also be manually created, modified, or deleted. When the partitioning is correct, select <guibutton>[ Finish ]</guibutton> to continue with the installation.</para> @@ -1309,8 +1309,8 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual"> <title>Manual Partitioning</title> - <para>Manual partitioning goes straight to the partition - editor.</para> + <para>Selecting this method opens the partition + editor:</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-create"> <title>Manually Create Partitions</title> @@ -1323,11 +1323,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Highlighting a drive (<filename>ada0</filename> in this - example) and selecting - <guibutton>[ Create ]</guibutton> displays a menu - for choosing the type of <emphasis>partitioning - scheme</emphasis>.</para> + <para>Highlight the installation drive (<filename>ada0</filename> in this + example) and select + <guibutton>[ Create ]</guibutton> to display a menu + of available partition schemes:</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-partscheme"> <title>Manually Create Partitions</title> @@ -1340,12 +1339,12 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para><acronym>GPT</acronym> partitioning is usually the most - appropriate choice for PC-compatible computers. Older PC - operating systems that are not compatible with - <acronym>GPT</acronym> may require <acronym>MBR</acronym> - partitioning instead. The other partitioning schemes are - generally used for uncommon or older computer systems.</para> + <para><acronym>GPT</acronym> is usually the most + appropriate choice for &arch.amd64; computers. Older computers + that are not compatible with + <acronym>GPT</acronym> should use <acronym>MBR</acronym>. + The other partition schemes are + generally used for uncommon or older computers.</para> <table frame="none" rowsep="1" pgwide="1"> <title>Partitioning Schemes</title> @@ -1361,16 +1360,15 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <tbody> <row> <entry>APM</entry> - <entry>Apple Partition Map, used by &powerpc; - &macintosh; (<link - xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692">http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692</link>).</entry>; + <entry>Apple Partition Map, used by &powerpc;.</entry> </row> <row> <entry>BSD</entry> - <entry>BSD Labels without an MBR, sometimes called - <quote>dangerously dedicated mode</quote>. See - &man.bsdlabel.8;.</entry> + <entry><acronym>BSD</acronym> label without an + <acronym>MBR</acronym>, sometimes called + <firstterm>dangerously dedicated mode</firstterm> as + non-<acronym>BSD</acronym> disk utilities may not recognize it.</entry> </row> <row> @@ -1387,7 +1385,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <row> <entry>PC98</entry> - <entry>MBR ariant used by NEC PC-98 computers (<link + <entry><acronym>MBR</acronym> variant used by NEC PC-98 computers (<link xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801</link>).</entry>; </row> @@ -1401,8 +1399,8 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </table> <para>After the partitioning scheme has been selected and - created, selecting <guibutton>[ Create ]</guibutton> - again will create new partitions.</para> + created, select <guibutton>[ Create ]</guibutton> + again to create the partitions.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-addpart"> <title>Manually Create Partitions</title> @@ -1419,15 +1417,13 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID at least three partitions:</para> <itemizedlist> - <title>Standard &os; <acronym>GPT</acronym> Partitions</title> - <listitem> - <para><literal>freebsd-boot</literal> - &os; boot + <para><literal>freebsd-boot</literal> - Holds the &os; boot code.</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para><literal>freebsd-ufs</literal> - A &os; UFS file + <para><literal>freebsd-ufs</literal> - A &os; <acronym>UFS</acronym> file system.</para> </listitem> @@ -1439,48 +1435,48 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <para>Another partition type worth noting is <literal>freebsd-zfs</literal>, used for partitions that will - contain a &os; <acronym>ZFS</acronym> file system. <xref - linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>. &man.gpart.8; shows more of + contain a &os; <acronym>ZFS</acronym> file system (<xref + linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>). Refer to &man.gpart.8; for descriptions of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition types.</para> - <para>Multiple file system partitions can be used, and some - people may prefer a traditional layout with separate + <para>Multiple file system partitions can be created and some + people prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions for the <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>, <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename> file systems. See <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an example.</para> - <para>Size may be entered with common abbreviations: + <para>The <literal>Size</literal> may be entered with common abbreviations: <emphasis>K</emphasis> for kilobytes, <emphasis>M</emphasis> for megabytes, or <emphasis>G</emphasis> for gigabytes.</para> <tip> <para>Proper sector alignment provides the best performance, - and making partition sizes even multiples of 4K bytes helps + and making partition sizes even multiples of 4K-bytes helps to ensure alignment on drives with either 512-byte or 4K-byte sectors. Generally, using partition sizes that are even multiples of 1M or 1G is the easiest way to make sure - every partition starts at an even multiple of 4K. One - exception: at present, the <emphasis>freebsd-boot</emphasis> - partition should be no larger than 512K due to boot code + every partition starts at an even multiple of 4K. There is one + exception: the <emphasis>freebsd-boot</emphasis> + partition should be no larger than 512K due to current boot code limitations.</para> </tip> - <para>A mountpoint is needed if this partition will contain a - file system. If only a single UFS partition will be created, + <para>A <literal>Mountpoint</literal> is needed if the partition will contain a + file system. If only a single <acronym>UFS</acronym> partition will be created, the mountpoint should be <filename>/</filename>.</para> - <para>A <emphasis>label</emphasis> is also requested. A label - is a name by which this partition will be known. Drive + <para>The <literal>Label</literal> is + a name by which the partition will be known. Drive names or numbers can change if the drive is connected to a different controller or port, but the partition label does not change. Referring to labels instead of drive names and partition numbers in files like <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> makes the system more tolerant - of changing hardware. GPT labels appear in + to hardware changes. <acronym>GPT</acronym> labels appear in <filename>/dev/gpt/</filename> when a disk is attached. Other - partitioning schemes have different label capabilities, and + partitioning schemes have different label capabilities and their labels appear in different directories in <filename>/dev/</filename>.</para> @@ -1488,9 +1484,9 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <para>Use a unique label on every file system to avoid conflicts from identical labels. A few letters from the computer's name, use, or location can be added to the label. - For instance, <literal>labroot</literal> or - <literal>rootfs-lab</literal> for the UFS root partition on - the lab's computer.</para> + For instance, use <literal>labroot</literal> or + <literal>rootfs-lab</literal> for the <acronym>UFS</acronym> root partition on + the computer named <literal>lab</literal>.</para> </tip> <example xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"> @@ -1511,7 +1507,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID label values as described above.</para> <para>By default, &os;'s <filename>gptboot</filename> expects - the first UFS partition found to be the + the first <acronym>UFS</acronym> partition to be the <filename>/</filename> partition.</para> <informaltable frame="none"> @@ -1583,23 +1579,23 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID installations was added in &os; 10.0-RELEASE. This partitioning mode only works with whole disks and will erase the contents of the entire disk. The installer will - automatically create partitions aligned to 4k boundaries, as - well as force <acronym>ZFS</acronym> to use 4k sectors. This + automatically create partitions aligned to 4k boundaries and + force <acronym>ZFS</acronym> to use 4k sectors. This is safe even with 512 byte sector disks, and has the added benefit of ensuring that pools created on 512 byte disks will - be able to have 4k sector disks added to them in the future, - for additional storage space, or as replacements for failed - disks. The installer can also optionally employ GELI disk + be able to have 4k sector disks added in the future, either as + additional storage space or as replacements for failed + disks. The installer can also optionally employ <acronym>GELI</acronym> disk encryption as described in <xref linkend="disks-encrypting-geli"/>. - If encryption is enabled, a 2 GB unencrypted boot pool is - created that contains the <filename>/boot</filename> - directory, which holds the kernel and other files necessary + If encryption is enabled, a 2 GB unencrypted boot pool + containing the <filename>/boot</filename> + directory is created. It holds the kernel and other files necessary to boot the system. A swap partition of a user selectable size is also created, and all remaining space is used for the <acronym>ZFS</acronym> pool.</para> - <para>The main <acronym>ZFS</acronym> menu in the installer + <para>The main <acronym>ZFS</acronym> configuration menu offers a number of options to control the creation of the pool.</para> @@ -1613,8 +1609,9 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>The most important option is selecting the vdev type and - one or more disks that will make up the vdev that will + <para>Select <keycap>T</keycap> to configure the <literal>Pool + Type</literal> and + the disk(s) that will constitute the pool. The automatic <acronym>ZFS</acronym> installer currently only supports the creation of a single top level vdev, except in stripe mode. To create more complex @@ -1624,9 +1621,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID including stripe (not recommended, no redundancy), mirror (best performance, least usable space), and RAID-Z 1, 2, and 3 (with the capability to withstand the concurrent failure of 1, - 2, and 3 disks, respectively). A tooltip across the bottom of - the screen while selecting the pool type provides advice about - the number of required disks for each type, and in the case of + 2, and 3 disks, respectively). while selecting the pool type, + a tooltip is displayed across the bottom of + the screen with advice about + the number of required disks, and in the case of RAID-Z, the optimal number of disks for each configuration.</para> @@ -1640,10 +1638,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Once a pool type has been selected, a list of available + <para>Once a <literal>Pool Type</literal> has been selected, a list of available disks is displayed, and the user is prompted to select one or more disks to make up the pool. The configuration is then - validated, to ensure enough disks were selected. If not, + validated, to ensure enough disks are selected. If not, select <guibutton><Change Selection></guibutton> to return to the list of disks, or <guibutton><Cancel></guibutton> to change the pool @@ -1674,11 +1672,11 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <para>If one or more disks are missing from the list, or if disks were attached after the installer was started, select <guibutton>- Rescan Devices</guibutton> to repopulate the list - of available disks. To ensure that the correct disk is + of available disks. To ensure that the correct disks are selected, so as not to accidently destroy the wrong disks, the <guibutton>- Disk Info</guibutton> menu can be used to inspect - each disk, including its partition table, and various other - information, including the device model number and serial + each disk, including its partition table and various other + information such as the device model number and serial number, if available.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-zfs-disk_info"> @@ -1691,16 +1689,17 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>The menu also allows the user to enter a name for the - pool, disable forcing 4k sectors, enable or disable + <para>The main <acronym>ZFS</acronym> configuration menu also + allows the user to enter a pool name, + disable forcing 4k sectors, enable or disable encryption, switch between <acronym>GPT</acronym> (recommended) and <acronym>MBR</acronym> partition table - types, and select the desired amount of swap space. Once all + types, and select the amount of swap space. Once all options have been set to the desired values, select the <guibutton>>>> Install</guibutton> option at the top of the menu.</para> - <para>If &man.geli.8; disk encryption was enabled, the + <para>If <acronym>GELI</acronym> disk encryption was enabled, the installer will prompt twice for the passphrase to be used to encrypt the disks.</para> @@ -1736,25 +1735,31 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-part-shell"> <title>Shell Mode Partitioning</title> - <para>When creating advanced installations the basic interface - of bsdinstall may not provide the level of flexibility - required. Selecting the <guibutton>Shell</guibutton> option - from the partitioning menu will drop the user to a shell. The - user is expected to partition the drives and create the - desired file system(s), populate an &man.fstab.5; file in + <para>When creating advanced installations, the + <application>bsdinstall</application> paritioning menus may + not provide the level of flexibility + required. Advanced users can select the <guibutton>Shell</guibutton> option + from the partitioning menu in order to + manually partition the drives, create the + file system(s), populate <filename>/tmp/bsdinstall_etc/fstab</filename>, and mount the file systems under <filename>/mnt</filename>. Once this is - done, running <command>exit</command> will return to - bsdinstall and continue the installation, starting with the - extraction of the distribution sets.</para> + done, type <command>exit</command> to return to + <application>bsdinstall</application> and continue the installation.</para> </sect2> </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="bsdinstall-final-warning"> <title>Committing to the Installation</title> - <para>This is the last chance for aborting the installation to - prevent changes to the hard drive.</para> + <para>Once the disks are configured, the next menu provides the + last chance to make changes before the selected + hard drive(s) are formatted. If changes need to be made, + select <guibutton>[ Back ]</guibutton> to return to + the main partitioning menu. + <guibutton>[ Revert & Exit ]</guibutton> + will exit the installer without making any changes to the hard + drive.</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-final-confirmation"> <title>Final Confirmation</title> @@ -1767,27 +1772,18 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Select <guibutton>[ Commit ]</guibutton> and press - <keycap>Enter</keycap> to proceed. If changes need to be made, - select <guibutton>[ Back ]</guibutton> to return to - the partition editor. - <guibutton>[ Revert & Exit ]</guibutton> - will exit the installer without making any changes to the hard - drive.</para> + <para>To instead start the actual installation, select + <guibutton>[ Commit ]</guibutton> and press + <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para> <para>Installation time will vary depending on the distributions - chosen, installation media, and speed of the computer. There - will be a series of messages displayed indicating + chosen, installation media, and speed of the computer. A + series of messages will indicate the progress.</para> - <para>Firstly, the installer will write the partitions to the - disk, and perform a <command>newfs</command> to initialise the - partitions.</para> - - <para>If doing a network install, - <application>bsdinstall</application> will then proceed to - download the required distribution files.</para> - <!-- XXXGA: What does it do if fetch fails? --> + <para>First, the installer formats the selected disk(s) and + initializes the partitions. Next, in the case of a bootonly + media, it downloads the selected components:</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-distfile-fetching"> <title>Fetching Distribution Files</title> @@ -1800,9 +1796,9 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Next, the integrity of the distribution files is verified, + <para>Next, the integrity of the distribution files is verified to ensure they have not been corrupted during download or - misread from the installation media.</para> + misread from the installation media:</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-distfile-verify"> <title>Verifying Distribution Files</title> @@ -1816,7 +1812,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </figure> <para>Finally, the verified distribution files are extracted to - the disk.</para> + the disk:</para> <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-distfile-extract"> <title>Extracting Distribution Files</title> @@ -1830,9 +1826,9 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID </figure> <para>Once all requested distribution files have been extracted, - <application>bsdinstall</application> will then drop straight - into the post-installation configuration tasks described in - <xref linkend="bsdinstall-post"/>.</para> + <application>bsdinstall</application> displays the first + post-installation menu. This series of menus is described in + the next section.</para> </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="bsdinstall-post">
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