Date: Mon, 15 Sep 2003 22:35:55 +0200 (CEST) From: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/56902: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags Message-ID: <20030915203555.C111060F2@gina.at> Resent-Message-ID: <200309152040.h8FKeFQI000705@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 56902
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] articles/fbsd-from-scratch: add/fix sgml tags
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: update
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Sep 15 13:40:15 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Josef El-Rayes
>Release: FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gina.at 5.1-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT #1: Sat Sep 13 13:22:16 CEST 2003 root@gina.at:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GINA i386
>Description:
docs/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/fbsd-from-scratch/article.sgml:
o add missing application-tags
o use note instead of itemizedlist
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig Mon Sep 15 18:39:23 2003
+++ article.sgml Mon Sep 15 18:50:50 2003
@@ -396,9 +396,9 @@
<para>Other areas are prepared for configuration, but will not work
until stage two is completed. For example we have copied files to
- configure printing and X11. Printing however is likely to need
+ configure printing and <application>X11</application>. Printing however is likely to need
applications not found in the base system, like &postscript;
- utilities. X11 will not run before we have compiled the server,
+ utilities. <application>X11</application> will not run before we have compiled the server,
libraries and programs.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
<literal>CONFIGURE_ARGS</literal>. The port
<filename>Makefile</filename> will use this as an initial value
and augment some other essential args. The difference to
- specifying a <filename>make</filename> variable on the command line
+ specifying a <application>make</application> variable on the command line
with</para>
<programlisting>news inn-stable make CONFIGURE_ARGS="--enable-uucp-rnews --enable-setgid-inews" install</programlisting>
@@ -566,14 +566,9 @@
<literal>4-STABLE</literal> may want to consider the following
areas:</para>
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>If you do not use the device file system
+ <note><para>If you do not use the device file system
(<literal>devfs</literal>) you may want to create devices for
some of your hardware with &man.MAKEDEV.8; in stage one, step
- six.</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
+ six.</para></note>
</sect1>
</article>
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---
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