Date: Tue, 25 Jun 2002 09:37:59 -0700 (PDT) From: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml Message-ID: <200206251637.g5PGbxT47484@freefall.freebsd.org>
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mwlucas 2002/06/25 09:37:58 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml
Log:
Sentences should be short enough to read without gasping for air in
the middle. While I'm here, reorganize a bit of language to make
things slightly more orderly.
Revision Changes Path
1.453 +9 -9 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
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