Date: Mon, 7 Aug 2006 07:28:47 +0000 (UTC) From: Yar Tikhiy <yar@FreeBSD.org> To: src-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-src@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: src/share/man/man4 acpi.4 Message-ID: <200608070728.k777SlRE016489@repoman.freebsd.org>
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yar 2006-08-07 07:28:47 UTC
FreeBSD src repository
Modified files:
share/man/man4 acpi.4
Log:
Fix things I misadvised to Nate Lawson:
- "Ns No" is redundant, so reduce it to just "Ns";
- use Li to mark up CPU and system power states because here they are
just strings to be typed literally (add more such mark-up as well);
- the best practice of typesetting tells us to use an en-dash to
indicate a closed range; fortunately, groff_char(7) provides such a symbol.
In addition, consistently use a comma between independent clauses
coordinated by a conjunction.
Pointed out by: ru (mark-up part)
MFC after: 3 days
Revision Changes Path
1.59 +44 -28 src/share/man/man4/acpi.4
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