Date: Sat, 24 May 2014 15:39:45 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44937 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop Message-ID: <201405241539.s4OFdjpi056645@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Sat May 24 15:39:44 2014 New Revision: 44937 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44937 Log: Remove redundant markup and words around filename tags and capitalize titles. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml Sat May 24 15:33:58 2014 (r44936) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/laptop/article.xml Sat May 24 15:39:44 2014 (r44937) @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ Option "Emulate3Buttons" </programlisting> - <para>in the <filename>xorg.conf</filename> file in the <literal>InputDevice</literal> + <para>in <filename>xorg.conf</filename> in the <literal>InputDevice</literal> section.</para> </sect1> @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="pcmcia"> - <title>PCMCIA (PC Card) devices</title> + <title>PCMCIA (PC Card) Devices</title> <para> Most laptops come with PCMCIA (also called PC Card) slots; these are supported fine under FreeBSD. Look through @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ particular most modems (16-bit) should work fine, provided they are not winmodems (these do exist even as PC Cards, so watch out). If your card is recognised as a generic modem, note that the - default <filename>pccard.conf</filename> file specifies a delay time of 10 seconds + default <filename>pccard.conf</filename> specifies a delay time of 10 seconds (to avoid freezes on certain modems); this may well be over-cautious for your modem, so you may want to play with it, reducing it or removing it totally.</para> @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ <sect1 xml:id="power-management"> - <title>Power management</title> + <title>Power Management</title> <para>Unfortunately, this is not very reliably supported under FreeBSD. If you are lucky, some functions may work reliably;
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