Date: Sat, 24 May 2014 20:44:43 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44944 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide Message-ID: <201405242044.s4OKihwo097910@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Sat May 24 20:44:43 2014 New Revision: 44944 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44944 Log: Remove some redundant words, add capitalization to titles, as well as redundant markup and words around <filename>. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat May 24 20:33:49 2014 (r44943) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat May 24 20:44:43 2014 (r44944) @@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your se </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="kerberos-ldap"> - <title>Kerberos and LDAP web password for &os; cluster</title> + <title>Kerberos and LDAP web Password for &os; Cluster</title> <para>Some of the services in the &os; cluster require a Kerberos password. In the &os; cluster, LDAP is proxying to Kerberos, so @@ -1866,7 +1866,7 @@ U stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4 &prompt.user; <userinput>cd sendmail</userinput> &prompt.user; <userinput>svn merge -c r<replaceable>261190</replaceable> ^/vendor/<replaceable>sendmail/dist</replaceable> .</userinput></screen> - <para><literal>^</literal> is an alias for the the + <para><literal>^</literal> is an alias for the repository path.</para> </tip> @@ -3027,9 +3027,9 @@ Relnotes: yes</programlisting> or <filename>$HOME/.ssh/id_rsa.pub</filename>) to the person setting you up as a committer so it can be put - into the + into <filename><replaceable>yourlogin</replaceable></filename> - file in + in <filename>/etc/ssh-keys/</filename> on <systemitem>freefall</systemitem>.</para> </step> @@ -3101,8 +3101,8 @@ Relnotes: yes</programlisting> <listitem> <para>Respect existing maintainers (if listed in the <varname>MAINTAINER</varname> field in - <filename>Makefile</filename> or in the - <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> file in the top-level + <filename>Makefile</filename> or in + <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> in the top-level directory).</para> </listitem>
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