Date: Mon, 6 Sep 2004 22:07:12 -0400 From: Len Zettel <zettel@acm.org> To: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-current@freebsd.org Subject: Re: RFC: 5.3 Migration Guide Message-ID: <200409062207.12805.zettel@acm.org> In-Reply-To: <1094519134.3249.6.camel@localhost> References: <1094426835.767.50.camel@localhost> <200409061427.30634.zettel@acm.org> <1094519134.3249.6.camel@localhost>
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On Monday 06 September 2004 09:05 pm, Bruce A. Mah wrote: > On Mon, 2004-09-06 at 11:27, Len Zettel wrote: > > OK, you asked :-). Attached are suggested cosmetic changes > > to the English. If this is premature, my apologies to all for wasting > > the bandwidth. > > Not a waste at all...thanks for tightening up the writing. I tend to be > a little verbose sometimes. I might take a little time to work through > this patch...there were one or two problems that I might solve a little > bit differently, but I want most of your changes. > Given something as subjective as writing style, I am only making suggestions... > Thanks! > Y' walcome - glad to help! -LenZ- > Bruce.
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