Date: Tue, 14 Feb 2012 22:55:05 -0500 From: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> To: Doug Barton <dougb@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: CfR: config chapter changes Message-ID: <CAF6rxgm2rvMPLbqNx2h7tBaAyFb_vba1CvX%2BGW-vPg%2BNynSRoQ@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <4F3B2A7A.3030505@FreeBSD.org> References: <CAF6rxgnvyoibFt7ijm6GpWoeF-eAOLu3SgvhEGCBDUAV4grybw@mail.gmail.com> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1202120028440.882@multics.mit.edu> <CAF6rxgmPyVXSFRJiOZZaJQFObhCsZMHS5_5UneVrb3t=wznMhA@mail.gmail.com> <4F3B2A7A.3030505@FreeBSD.org>
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On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 10:46 PM, Doug Barton <dougb@freebsd.org> wrote: > On 02/14/2012 19:36, Eitan Adler wrote: >> What about the following? > > For my taste it's still a little too wordy .... In looking this over I > have some ideas, but can't really put work into it right atm, is > updating this urgent? If not, what's your time frame? I'd like to commit some changes in the next week or so and would be happy to continue making improvements in the future. On the other hand this isn't urgent by any sense of the word. -- Eitan Adler
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