Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 21:03:31 +0100 From: Chris Rees <crees@FreeBSD.org> To: Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Updates to features.html Message-ID: <CADLo839D8-3UPcNhKkj4Mbw=P=vN7cagQptKU5aWNDE6cDurjw@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <CA%2BhK6ZkERMf9c%2BP4Aq_D57%2B7m%2B=tGyHYJYUeTJTRHiW=HT9RaQ@mail.gmail.com> References: <CA%2BhK6ZkkxLddTsNx85zuRT44TJpJsc1p4uMq%2B%2BG44rU8W63F9g@mail.gmail.com> <CAF6rxgm4r4FEtNi8Gsmn1Wj8UO4Dga5PvpPR_quB=x%2B-FhnbDw@mail.gmail.com> <CA%2BhK6ZkERMf9c%2BP4Aq_D57%2B7m%2B=tGyHYJYUeTJTRHiW=HT9RaQ@mail.gmail.com>
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On 1 October 2012 20:48, Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> wrote: > Thank you for the tips. Also, ZFS is mentioned in 7.X, but not for 8/9-- this is a Big Thing for us! Nice work. Chris > On Mon, Oct 1, 2012 at 12:34 PM, Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> wrote: > >> On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> wrote: >> > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at >> > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html >> >> General comments: >> >> This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but >> are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or >> giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing >> document, not a technical one. >> >> Specific comments: >> ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than >> 10 years now ;) >> "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a >> feature? >> Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge >> of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed? >> Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make >> this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all* >> the headers were links to handbook pages. >> >> I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section. >> >> > And tell me what you think of it. >> >> Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on >> the website! I hope that your work makes it in. >> >> Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well? >> >> -- >> Eitan Adler >> > > > > -- > -------------------------------------------------------- > Chris Petrik > FreeBSD Contributor > Reincarnated > cpet on irc > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >
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