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Date:      Sat, 16 Oct 2004 10:53:12 +0200
From:      Matteo Riondato <rionda@gufi.org>
To:        freebsd-current@freebsd.org
Subject:   UPDATING readability
Message-ID:  <1097916792.1810.4.camel@kaiser.sig11.org>

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Could we change an entry from:

20041007:
        One of the syscalls the 1:1 threading library libthr uses has
        changed, thus breaking ABI compatibility. Make sure you 	rebuild
this library with the kernel.

to:

20041007:
        One of the syscalls used by the 1:1 threading library libthr 
	has changed, thus breaking ABI compatibility. Make sure you 	rebuild
this library with the kernel.

?
I think this will improve the readability and the comprension of the
entry by the non-native english speakers.
Best Regards
-- 
Rionda aka Matteo Riondato
GUFI Staff Member (http://www.gufi.org)
FreeSBIE Developer (http://www.freesbie.org)
BSD-FAQ-it Main Developer (http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda)
Sent from: kaiser.sig11.org running FreeBSD-6.0-CURRENT

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