Date: Mon, 13 Aug 2001 11:08:04 +0100 From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org> To: Randy Pratt <rpratt@ezwv.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: Handbook addition: Install Message-ID: <20010813110804.A84120@canyon.nothing-going-on.org> In-Reply-To: <01081121030602.00381@k6-2.weeble.com>; from rpratt@ezwv.com on Sat, Aug 11, 2001 at 09:03:06PM -0400 References: <01081121030602.00381@k6-2.weeble.com>
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--nFreZHaLTZJo0R7j Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sat, Aug 11, 2001 at 09:03:06PM -0400, Randy Pratt wrote: > They are posted at: >=20 > http://people.freebsd.org/~rpratt/hdbk/view/ (html build) > http://people.freebsd.org/~rpratt/hdbk/src/ (sources) A couple of comments. I don't think we should be reproducing the help text in the Handbook,=20 unless we punt it to an appendix, or similar. It disrupts the flow of the text, and will confuse the reader if it gets out of sync with the text in sysinstall. I think the security profile section may now be out of date after Robert's recent changes. We should probably crop some of the images -- anything that shows a four line dialog box on a big blue background should really just be showing the dialog box, no background. This is something that can happen to the =2Escr files post-import though. Apart from those minor niggles, this is great. I'd suggest pulling out the help text, and then committing without delay. N --=20 FreeBSD: The Power to Serve http://www.freebsd.org/ FreeBSD Documentation Project http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/ --- 15B8 3FFC DDB4 34B0 AA5F 94B7 93A8 0764 2C37 E375 --- --nFreZHaLTZJo0R7j Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.6 (FreeBSD) Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org iEYEARECAAYFAjt3pwMACgkQk6gHZCw343V6DACfZM0W/DlExbq6U4ftZTby5xTg PIMAmgKrO1aoR0R94f3IUOV35gA7hg8Q =UM+P -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --nFreZHaLTZJo0R7j-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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