Date: Fri, 31 Aug 2001 09:30:01 -0700 (PDT) From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/30203: description of security profiles in FAQ is just plain wrong Message-ID: <200108311630.f7VGU1V07031@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/30203; it has been noted by GNATS.
From: Dima Dorfman <dima@unixfreak.org>
To: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/30203: description of security profiles in FAQ is just plain wrong
Date: Fri, 31 Aug 2001 09:24:50 -0700
Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org> wrote:
> On Thu, Aug 30, 2001 at 03:00:25AM -0700, Dima Dorfman wrote:
> > Why did all these lines get replaced?
>
> Because my fingers are trained to automatically type esc-Q. :)
>
> Is this more like it?
Yes. I've applied it after fixing a few minor nits:
> --- book.sgml-dist Thu Aug 30 11:10:07 2001
> +++ book.sgml-secprof Thu Aug 30 11:10:03 2001
> @@ -2178,52 +2178,38 @@
...
> - <para>Following is a table that describes what each security
> - profile does. The columns are the choices you have for a
> - security profile, and the rows are the program or feature that
> - is enabled or disabled.</para>
> + <para>The following table describes what each of the
> + security profiles does. The columns are the choices you
"...what each of the security profiles does". The verb (does) doesn't
agree in number with the subject (profiles). Or something like
that--you get the idea. I'm not an English teacher, so I probably got
the terms all wrong. I changed 'does' to 'do'.
> <row>
> <entry></entry>
>
> <entry>Extreme</entry>
>
> - <entry>High</entry>
> -
> <entry>Moderate</entry>
>
> - <entry>Low</entry>
> </row>
Excess vertical whitespace. This ends up looking like:
<entry>Moderate</entry>
</row>
which is wrong.
There are some more caes of this below, which I've also fixed before
committing.
Thanks!
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