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Date:      Thu, 17 Oct 2002 14:19:35 +0300
From:      Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de>
Cc:        freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: Please review: new handbook chapter on serial install
Message-ID:  <20021017111934.GD14331@hades.hell.gr>
In-Reply-To: <20021015195849.GA76747@nathan.internal>
References:  <20021015195849.GA76747@nathan.internal>

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On 2002-10-15 21:58, Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de> wrote:
> +	modified boot floppy.  The easiest solution (and the only one
> +	described in this chapter) is to create a modified boot floppy
> +	because this can be done with the on-board tools of a standard
> +	installation. [...]

I'd probably prefer "system tools" instead of "on-board tools".

> +	<step>
> +	  <para>Mount the file system on
> +	    <filename>kern.flp</filename>, create a sutitable

suitable.

> +      <para>After a while, you should see activity on your serial
> +	console, probably the <quote>sppiner</quote>, followed by the
> +	usual start messages from the kernel.

`spinner' perhaps?  What is this supposed to mean?  Are you referring
to the spinning character that is visible right before the kernel boots?

> +	<literal>Fixit</literal> menu.  Just type <command>echo -P
> +	&gt;  /boot.config</command>, exit the shell, quit

I usually prefer seeing commands in <screen> elements, that stand out
a lot better than <command> in running text.  The <command> tags are
more fit imho for marking up command names that have to be seen as
part of a sentence instead of literal terminal output.  My suggestion
for this part would something like:

	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo -P &gt; /boot.config</userinput></screen>

Giorgos.

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