Date: Wed, 31 Mar 2004 10:09:35 -0500 From: Asenchi <asenchi@asenchi.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: IPv6 chapter diff Message-ID: <20040331100935.2c90efb2@blue>
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Here is a revision taking into consideration those that replied.
Marc, I cc'd you to point out the new changes. Thx.
--- chapter.sgml.old Sat Mar 20 17:36:40 2004
+++ chapter.sgml Wed Mar 31 10:08:15 2004
@@ -5000,7 +5000,7 @@
<title>Further Reading</title>
<para>The DHCP protocol is fully described in
- <ulink url="http://www.freesoft.org/CIE/RFC/2131/">RFC
2131</ulink>.+ <ulink
url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2131.txt?number=2131">RFC 2131</ulink>.
An informational resource has also been set up at <ulink
url="http://www.dhcp.org/">dhcp.org</ulink>.</para>; </sect2>
@@ -5263,7 +5263,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- RFC1034 and RFC1035 dictate the DNS protocol.
+ <ulink
url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc1034.txt?number=1034">RFC1034</ulink>;
and <ulink url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc1035.txt?number=1035">RFC1035
dictate the DNS protocol. </para>
<para>
@@ -6259,13 +6259,13 @@
<listitem>
<para><ulink
- url="ftp://ftp.isi.edu/in-notes/rfc1034.txt">RFC1034
+
url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc1034.txt?number=1034">RFC1034
- Domain Names - Concepts and Facilities</ulink></para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para><ulink
- url="ftp://ftp.isi.edu/in-notes/rfc1035.txt">RFC1035
+ url="<ulink
url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc1035.txt?number=1035">RFC1035
- Domain Names - Implementation and Specification</ulink></para>
</listitem> </itemizedlist>
@@ -6675,7 +6675,7 @@
<para>Each machine and interface behind the LAN should be
assigned IP address numbers in the private network space as
defined by <ulink
- url="ftp://ftp.isi.edu/in-notes/rfc1918.txt">RFC 1918</ulink>
+ url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc1918.txt?number=1918">RFC
1918</ulink> and have a default gateway of the
<application>natd</application> machine's internal IP
address.</para>
@@ -7550,7 +7550,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Address autoconfiguration (RFC2462)</para>
+ <para>Address autoconfiguration (<ulink
url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2462.txt?number=2462">RFC2462</ulink>)<;
/para> </listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -7681,7 +7681,7 @@
scrambled Ethernet MAC as part of the auto configuration.</para>
<para>For further information on the structure of IPv6 addresses
- see RFC3513.</para>
+ see <ulink
url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3513.txt?number=3513">RFC3513</ulink>.<;
/para> </sect2>
<sect2>
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