Date: Mon, 14 Jun 2004 14:41:05 -0700 (PDT) From: Matthew McGraw <matthew_mcgraw@yahoo.com> To: fbsd_user@a1poweruser.com Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: re: firewall section of handbook Message-ID: <20040614214105.71339.qmail@web51010.mail.yahoo.com>
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hey joe, matthew here from the freebsd-doc list. i have reviewed your firewall section and i must say that your content is excellent. i am a relativly new fbsd user myself, and i got much out of your document. kudos to you. i have volunteered my services as an editor/proofreader to the group so i read your docs with that in mind. attached to this email, please find a word (.doc) document reflecting some edits to your work. i colored my changes/edits and tried to include comments in italics so you could understand where i was coming from. i hope this is seen as helpful and not as an insult to your work. as i said before, your content is top-notch. my suggestions are only to improve readability/grammar. thanks, matthew mcgraw Matthew McGraw 702.860.7013 --------------------------------- Do you Yahoo!? Friends. Fun. Try the all-new Yahoo! Messenger
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