Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2004 15:07:59 +0100 From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: New firewall section (was: Re: HEADS UP: doc/ slush begins) Message-ID: <20040920140759.GD2493@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <20040920133025.GB38865@orion.daedalusnetworks.priv> References: <20040918.161309.35654157.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp> <20040919105246.GW1538@submonkey.net> <200409191740.06579.so14k@so14k.com> <200409191905.56649.so14k@so14k.com> <20040920110628.GA2493@submonkey.net> <20040920133025.GB38865@orion.daedalusnetworks.priv>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On Mon, Sep 20, 2004 at 04:30:25PM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2004-09-20 12:06, Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote: > > > > Referring to ... http://freebsd.so14k.com/firewall/ > > > > Is everyone else happy (doceng/translators) if this were to go in before > > the release? > > FWIW, the new text is definitely a lot more detailed than what we already have > (which is absolutely GREAT) but it has many places where a bit of improvement > is needed :-/ > > There are a few parts that I wanted to mail Brad about asking for extra > clarifications, rewordings, changes in the style and/or content of this. > I just didn't get a chance to read the entire chapter carefully. If you're available now, and would like to work at this, please do. I haven't read the whole patch yet either, and won't until this evening at the earliest. I pretty much only have evenings available for a good time from now. I'd rather this was correct before it gets committed, especially as I believe that the current text is simply less shiny as opposed to incorrect. Ceri -- It is not tinfoil, it is my new skin. I am a robot. [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFBTuQ/ocfcwTS3JF8RAoFcAJ0V8DKX7qXR0WHaNFxjbTChi6bWUwCeOpIP Shj5HG9YHm9PQmex9/jSDRs= =LMCV -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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