Date: Mon, 23 Mar 2009 17:45:04 +0800 From: Li <fender0107401@gmail.com> To: freebsd-doc <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org> Subject: Erratra report for <a project model for the freebsd project> Message-ID: <20090323094504.GA1350@PC-686.Workstation>
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Hi all: As a freebsd user and big fan, I always try to do something to improve or help our system. Recently, I printed this doc: <a project model for the freebsd project> pdf_version, I read it several times , and I found something maybe not correct totally, so I wrote them below, I think someone will correct them. Note: the page number is according to the pdf version. Report format: page number | wrong | right vi | .1 | 1. (this is for notes) vi | Marleen Devos's email is ? | ? 1 | the communications overhead | the communication's overhead 3 | estimated 5500 contributors on the project, but in figure 3-1 and 3-2 the number is -3000 | ? 4 | 12600 ports.1 | 12600 ports1. (this is for notes) 6 | 4.4BSD.3 | 4.4BSD3. (this is for notes) 7 | updates.5 | updates5. (this is for notes) 10 5.1.2 | should be made | should be made. 10 5.1.4 | This involves involves | This involves 11 | box betten "Core Secretary" and "GNATS Administrator" is blank | ? 13 5.2.6| The resposibilities of the Release Engineering Team are | add ":" in the end, and following sentences need "." too. 21 | The code is than committed and the deployed | The code is than committed and deployed Others: all figures in this doc is not well, fonts always small, seems well if you see the html version. -- Just be yourself. -----------------
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