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Date:      Sat, 15 Oct 2011 10:46:42 -0700
From:      John-Mark Gurney <jmg@funkthat.com>
To:        freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   minor rewording for committers guide
Message-ID:  <20111015174641.GQ14645@funkthat.com>

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I was trying to find the repo for the www, but the note IMO was poorly
worded, so I have this patch.  Should I go ahead and commit?

P.S. I'm not on the list, so please include me in the reply.

Thanks.

Index: article.sgml
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RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.303
diff -u -r1.303 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	11 Sep 2011 18:04:15 -0000	1.303
+++ article.sgml	15 Oct 2011 17:40:26 -0000
@@ -304,9 +304,10 @@
       <application>CVS</application> but in Subversion.  The official
       and exported trees are not necessarily equal.</para>
 
-    <note><para>Note that the <literal>www</literal> module containing sources
-      for the <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org">FreeBSD website</ulink> is
-      contained within the <literal>doc</literal> repository.</para></note>
+    <note><para>Note that the sources for the
+      <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org">FreeBSD website</ulink> are
+      contained within the <literal>www</literal> module of the
+      <literal>doc</literal> repository.</para></note>
 
     <para>The CVS repositories are hosted on the repository machines.
       Currently, each of the repositories above reside on the same physical

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