Date: Mon, 23 Jul 2001 10:40:22 +0200 From: Sheldon Hearn <sheldonh@starjuice.net> To: Dima Dorfman <dd@FreeBSD.org> Cc: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/bin/ls ls.1 Message-ID: <46876.995877622@axl.seasidesoftware.co.za> In-Reply-To: Your message of "Sun, 22 Jul 2001 03:33:31 MST." <200107221033.f6MAXVY73755@freefall.freebsd.org>
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On Sun, 22 Jul 2001 03:33:31 MST, Dima Dorfman wrote:
> Modified files:
> bin/ls ls.1
> Log:
> Don't put a shell prompt in the example since none of the other man
> pages do it. Also, don't use brackets to indicate optional options in
> the example; instead, add a paragraph below the example explaining it.
The use of the second person ("you") in this document is getting worse.
It began with that god-awful colour import, and this delta adds more.
Please be careful not to introduce the second person ("you") into
documents that are relatively pure in this respect.
Ciao,
Sheldon.
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