Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 09:08:08 -0500 From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: newbies page (ppp) Message-ID: <4D00E2C8.8020206@gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org> References: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org>
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Hi Ryusuke, On 12/9/10 8:31 AM, Ryusuke SUZUKI wrote: > Hello, > > "Resorces for Newvies" page, > http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html > >> The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation >> to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant >> to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information >> and the latest updates. > > "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..." > > Do you agree? > > I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days. > > How about the following patch? > > diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml > --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 > +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000 > @@ -70,9 +70,8 @@ > beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy > this one.</p></li> > > - <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is > - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those > - parts of the > + <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. > + You might start with at least those parts of the I think with this rewording, "at least" can be removed. Best regards, -- Glen Barber
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