Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 16:35:18 +0200 From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> Cc: svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.org, Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users Message-ID: <519B8626.30405@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1305210827060.79332@wonkity.com> References: <201305190001.r4J01wQe092105@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1305210827060.79332@wonkity.com>
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-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Am 21.05.13 16:32, schrieb Warren Block: > On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote: > >> Author: trhodes Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 New Revision: >> 41667 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667 >> >> Log: Add more information on binary formats in basics. Add a >> note about sudo in the users chapter. Add a section on using root >> in the users chapter. >> >> Modified: >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> >> >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml >> >> >> Modified: >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> >> >> ============================================================================== >> >> --- >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013 (r41666) +++ >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 (r41667) @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@ >> console none managing requests for hardware devices, >> peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user.</para> >> >> + <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the >> chapter > > It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there. > >> + about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>. For now you >> just + need to know that each person (user) who uses the >> computer should be + given their own username and password. >> The system keeps track + of the people using the computer >> based on this username. Since + it is often the case that >> several people are working on the same + project Unix also >> provides groups. Several users can be placed > > Needs a comma after "project". > > Did not look at the rest, maybe later. Also, the use of "you" is discouraged in the handbook. Benedict -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.8 (Darwin) Comment: GPGTools - http://gpgtools.org Comment: Using GnuPG with Thunderbird - http://www.enigmail.net/ iEUEARECAAYFAlGbhiUACgkQTSZQLkqBk0hMPwCcC9OxxUkV7vQFt9cE7SmoHXBD msIAl3zKCreAOEoWS8gQTu3eQFhrLkc= =JNV4 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
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