Date: Mon, 08 Sep 2003 15:56:07 -0700 From: "Michael K. Smith" <mksmith@noanet.net> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org>, <FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: Pre-commit review requested Message-ID: <BB825717.1CF08%mksmith@noanet.net> In-Reply-To: <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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On 9/8/03 11:22 AM, "Tom Rhodes" <trhodes@freebsd.org> wrote: > Any -doc committer want to review the following patch. It is by no > way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one > step further toward my goal of a good security chapter. > > This diff: > > o Adds <application>, <acronym>, and other tags as required. > o Uses the &os; entity. > o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what > version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release. > o Modifies <indexterm> and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerberos5. > > I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rather > not bounce this around for the next three days. Thanks! Shouldn't: + <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;, + such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and MD5.</para> Be: + <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;, + such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and <acronym>MD5</acronym>.</para> Mike -- Michael K. Smith NoaNet 206.219.7116 (work) 206.579.8360 (cell) mksmith@noanet.net http://www.noanet.net
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