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Date:      Tue, 21 May 2013 08:32:21 -0600 (MDT)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1305210827060.79332@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <201305190001.r4J01wQe092105@svn.freebsd.org>
References:  <201305190001.r4J01wQe092105@svn.freebsd.org>

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On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote:

> Author: trhodes
> Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013
> New Revision: 41667
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667
>
> Log:
>  Add more information on binary formats in basics.
>  Add a note about sudo in the users chapter.
>  Add a section on using root in the users chapter.
>
> Modified:
>  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
>  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml	Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013	(r41666)
> +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml	Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013	(r41667)
> @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@ console none
>       managing requests for hardware devices, peripherals, memory, and
>       CPU time fairly to each user.</para>
>
> +    <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the chapter

It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there.

> +      about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>.  For now you just
> +      need to know that each person (user) who uses the computer should be
> +      given their own username and password.  The system keeps track
> +      of the people using the computer based on this username.  Since
> +      it is often the case that several people are working on the same
> +      project Unix also provides groups.  Several users can be placed

Needs a comma after "project".

Did not look at the rest, maybe later.



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