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Date:      Fri, 26 May 2023 18:10:08 +0000
From:      bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org
To:        doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   [Bug 271658] FreeBSD Handbook: Guided Partitioning Using Root-on-ZFS: improve the examples
Message-ID:  <bug-271658-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>

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            Bug ID: 271658
           Summary: FreeBSD Handbook: Guided Partitioning Using
                    Root-on-ZFS: improve the examples
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Some People
          Priority: ---
         Component: Books & Articles
          Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: grahamperrin@freebsd.org

<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/#bsdinstall-part-zfs>;

<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/#bsdinstall-zfs-vdev_type>;
the selection is 'stripe'. 

In the next image
<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/#bsdinstall-zfs-disk_select>,
the reader might reasonably assume that the two selected disks are to be
striped. 

In the next image
<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/#bsdinstall-zfs-vdev_invalid>,
suddenly it's not striping. 

Also, there's no white space above the image, as if it's Figure 22. It's not,
it's Figure 23. 

This subsection might be improved by better titling of figures. Maybe precede
one set of figures with explanatory text.

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