Date: Sun, 17 Jan 2016 02:27:56 +0000 (UTC) From: Benjamin Kaduk <bjk@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48037 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status Message-ID: <201601170227.u0H2Ru3Z004907@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: bjk Date: Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016 New Revision: 48037 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48037 Log: A couple grammar/style tweaks from koobs Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Sat Jan 16 18:29:11 2016 (r48036) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016 (r48037) @@ -2490,7 +2490,7 @@ <p>The Security Team reorganisation, first proposed to Core during a meeting at BSDCan this year by Gleb Smirnoff — core - member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer — has now + member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer (SO) — has now been accomplished. In order to improve the project's responsiveness to security alerts, to maintain security on privileged information received in confidence before general @@ -2502,7 +2502,7 @@ security problems, and connecting them with appropriate individuals within the project with the technical expertise to address the identified concerns. The SO team was cut down to just - the Security Officer and his deputy, assisted by a secretary, and + the Security Officer and their deputy, assisted by a secretary, and with input and help in drafting security advisories from former and any potential future Security Officers plus liasons with Core, Cluster Administration and Release Engineering.</p>
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