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<ds@ukrhub.net> List-Id: Documentation project <freebsd-doc.freebsd.org> List-Unsubscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/options/freebsd-doc>, <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe> List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc/>; List-Post: <mailto:freebsd-doc@freebsd.org> List-Help: <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=help> List-Subscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc>, <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe> X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 28 Nov 2013 07:35:04 -0000 --zhXaljGHf11kAtnf Content-Type: text/plain; charset=koi8-u Content-Disposition: inline There's a second lap, which includes received suggestions. -- WBR, Taras Korenko --zhXaljGHf11kAtnf Content-Type: text/x-diff; charset=koi8-u Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="02.en.hb.users.diff" Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml =================================================================== --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (revision 43259) +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml (working copy) @@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ <listitem> <para>The user name is typed at the <prompt>login:</prompt> - prompt. User names must be unique on the system as no two - users can have the same user name. There are a number of + prompt. Each user must have a unique user name. + There are a number of rules for creating valid user names, documented in &man.passwd.5;. Typically user names consist of eight or fewer all lower case characters in order to maintain @@ -91,9 +91,7 @@ <term>Password</term> <listitem> - <para>Each account has an associated password. While the - password can be blank, this is highly discouraged and - every account should have a password.</para> + <para>Each account has an associated password.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -148,9 +146,9 @@ <term>Password change time</term> <listitem> - <para>By default &os; does not force users to change their - passwords periodically. Password expiration can be - enforced on a per-user basis, forcing some or all users to + <para>By default, passwords do not expire. + However, password expiration can be + enabled on a per-user basis, forcing some or all users to change their passwords after a certain amount of time has elapsed.</para> </listitem> @@ -377,7 +375,7 @@ <primary><filename>/usr/share/skel</filename></primary> </indexterm> <indexterm><primary>skeleton directory</primary></indexterm> - <para>&man.adduser.8; is a simple program for adding new users + <para>&man.adduser.8; is a simple program for adding new users. When a new user is added, this program automatically updates <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and <filename>/etc/group</filename>. It also creates a home @@ -527,7 +525,7 @@ <para>When passed no options, aside from an optional username, &man.chpass.1; displays an editor containing user information. - When the user exists from the editor, the user database is + When the user exits from the editor, the user database is updated with the new information.</para> <note> @@ -773,8 +771,7 @@ this limit too small may hinder a user's productivity as it is often useful to be logged in multiple times or to execute pipelines. Some tasks, such as compiling a large - program, spawn multiple processes and other intermediate - preprocessors.</para> + program, start lots of processes.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -818,7 +815,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The limit on the amount of network memory, and - thus mbufs<indexterm><primary>sbsize</primary></indexterm><indexterm><primary>limiting users</primary><secondary>sbsize</secondary></indexterm>, a user may consume in order to limit network + thus mbufs<indexterm><primary>sbsize</primary></indexterm><indexterm><primary>limiting users</primary><secondary>sbsize</secondary></indexterm>, a user may consume. This can be generally used to limit network communications.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -960,7 +957,7 @@ <para>In this example, the argument to <option>-m</option> is a comma-delimited list of users who are to be added to the group. Unlike the previous example, these users are appended to the - group list and do not replace the list of existing users in the + group and do not replace the list of existing users in the group.</para> <example> --zhXaljGHf11kAtnf--
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