Date: Thu, 21 Aug 2014 12:13:33 -0400 From: Benjamin Kaduk <bjkfbsd@gmail.com> To: "Bjoern A. Zeeb" <bz@freebsd.org> Cc: "svn-src-head@freebsd.org" <svn-src-head@freebsd.org>, "svn-src-all@freebsd.org" <svn-src-all@freebsd.org>, "src-committers@freebsd.org" <src-committers@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: svn commit: r270268 - head/share/man/man4 Message-ID: <CAJ5_RoCQkWf61grC2jyxaT33QXHA5-ponBocruXJow4i0bszFw@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <201408211250.s7LCoBQr054942@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201408211250.s7LCoBQr054942@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Thu, Aug 21, 2014 at 8:50 AM, Bjoern A. Zeeb <bz@freebsd.org> wrote: > Author: bz > Date: Thu Aug 21 12:50:11 2014 > New Revision: 270268 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/270268 > > Log: > Document MAC address selection and setting for atse(4). > > Submitted by: brooks > MFC after: 3 days > Sponsored by: DARPA/AFRL > > Modified: > head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4 > > Modified: head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4 > > ============================================================================== > --- head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4 Thu Aug 21 12:30:01 2014 > (r270267) > +++ head/share/man/man4/altera_atse.4 Thu Aug 21 12:50:11 2014 > (r270268) > +If the stored address is invalid, for example all zero's, multicast, or > the > +default address shipped on all DE4 boards (00:07:ed:ff:ed:15) then a > random > +address is generated when the device is attached. > I think that "all zeros" does not take an apostrophe. Also, the use of commas is slightly unclear, since "for example all zeros" is really a parenthetical, not a member of the comma-separated list. -Ben
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