Date: Wed, 06 Dec 2006 10:13:59 -0800 From: Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org> To: Dmitry Morozovsky <marck@rinet.ru> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> Subject: Removing CIDR references (Was: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml) Message-ID: <45770867.6010808@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20061205135214.K72517@woozle.rinet.ru> References: <200612041443.kB4EhpBG035838@repoman.freebsd.org> <4574A587.3050903@FreeBSD.org> <20061205135214.K72517@woozle.rinet.ru>
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Dmitry Morozovsky wrote: > On Mon, 4 Dec 2006, Doug Barton wrote: > > DB> > Modified files: > DB> > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml > DB> > Log: > DB> > A class C network for 192.168.0.0/24 includes the address > DB> > range 192.168.0.0-192.168.0.255, not 192.168.0.0-192.168.255.255 > DB> > > DB> > Submitted by: Tom Van Looy <tom@ctors.net> > DB> > > DB> > Revision Changes Path > DB> > 1.338 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml > DB> > > DB> > http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml.diff?&r1=1.337&r2=1.338&f=h > DB> > > DB> > DB> In an ideal world, all references to Class [ABC] networks would > DB> disappear from our docs, and be replaced by their CIDR equivalents. > > There are suprisingly small number of such places. What do you think about the > patch attached? Great start! A few comments in line. > Index: articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.20 > diff -u -r1.20 article.sgml > --- articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 8 Aug 2004 13:43:54 -0000 1.20 > +++ articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 > @@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ > <devicename>xl0</devicename> towards the inside > (<acronym>LAN</acronym>). The bridge machine has the IP <hostid > role="ipaddr">1.2.3.4</hostid> (it is not possible that your > - <acronym>ISP</acronym> can give you a class A address like this, but for > + <acronym>ISP</acronym> can give you an address quite like this, but for > our example it is good).</para> > > <programlisting># Things that we have kept state on before get to go through in a hurry > Index: books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.338 > diff -u -r1.338 chapter.sgml > --- books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 4 Dec 2006 14:43:50 -0000 1.338 > +++ books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 > @@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@ > > <listitem> > <para>The address block being used for this local area > - network is a Class C block > + network is a (historical) Class C block > (<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> - > <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>). > The default netmask is for a Class C network network is <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0/24</hostid>, which encompasses the range from <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> -<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>). The default netmask for this network > Index: books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.173 > diff -u -r1.173 chapter.sgml > --- books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 30 May 2006 23:08:24 -0000 1.173 > +++ books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 > @@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ > > <para>For example, if you have three dialup customers, > <username>fred</username>, <username>sam</username>, and > - <username>mary</username>, that you route class C networks > + <username>mary</username>, that you route /24 CIDR networks > for, you would type the following:</para> > > <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ln -s /etc/ppp/ppp-shell /etc/ppp/ppp-fred</userinput> > @@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ > should also contain routing information for each static > IP user if required. The line below would add a route > for the <hostid role="ipaddr">203.14.101.0</hostid> > - class C via the client's ppp link.</para> > + /24 CIDR network via the client's ppp link.</para> for the <hostid role="ipaddr">203.14.101.0/24</hostid> network via the client's ppp link.</para>
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