Date: Sun, 7 Sep 2003 07:49:26 -0700 (PDT) From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200309071449.h87EnR1T054531@repoman.freebsd.org>
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ceri 2003/09/07 07:49:26 PDT
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
chapter.sgml
Log:
o Change one usage of "i.e." to "e.g." where it makes more sense, and remove
an unnecessary colon.
o If X is the chief weakness of something, then it actually is the most
important one. Remove some confusing text from a sentence.
Revision Changes Path
1.241 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
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