Date: Fri, 03 Jan 2003 15:23:35 -0500 (EST) From: John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> To: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net> Cc: doc@freebsd.org, Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org> Subject: Re: request for review Message-ID: <XFMail.20030103152335.jhb@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030103201347.GB10906@submonkey.net>
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On 03-Jan-2003 Ceri Davies wrote: > On Fri, Jan 03, 2003 at 07:59:36PM +0000, Ceri Davies wrote: > + <td>Absolute BSD. This book discusses management of > + FreeBSD-based servers in an enterprise, high-performance > + environment. > > Add another comma after "high-performance". Why? One doesn't normally put commas between adjectives and the nouns they describe. I might write "the green, fast car", but I wouldn't write "the green, car" or "the green, fast, car". -- John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> <>< http://www.FreeBSD.org/~jhb/ "Power Users Use the Power to Serve!" - http://www.FreeBSD.org/ To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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