Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 14:13:58 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org> Cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20041207141358.21d2e72b@localhost> In-Reply-To: <200412071850.iB7Ioau1097876@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200412071850.iB7Ioau1097876@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Tue, 7 Dec 2004 18:50:36 +0000 (UTC) Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org> wrote: > hmp 2004-12-07 18:50:36 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml > Log: > Minor clarification (data sensitivity) in the MAC glossary. The "clarification" has made the sentence almost impossible to comprehend. I looked at it since it appeard in my recently prepared patch, glad I seen it. Then Ceri pointed it out on the lists (which I noticed before making this reply). I don't mind the additional information you added, but please use a comma in place of (...) and rewrite the sentence to a comprehendable state. Thanks! -- Tom Rhodes
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