Date: Sat, 9 Oct 2004 12:53:47 +0200 From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/72462: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article Message-ID: <20041009105324.C0FB037E43@smtp3-2-sn3.vrr.skanova.net> Resent-Message-ID: <200410091100.i99B0fmV001168@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 72462
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sat Oct 09 11:00:40 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Joel Dahl
>Release: FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 #1: Sat Jul 10 16:52:28 CEST 2004 root@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WORKSTATION i386
>Description:
Attached patch includes grammatical fixes and a few corrections.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- hub.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml Sat Oct 2 18:25:55 2004
+++ new.article.sgml Sat Oct 9 12:27:48 2004
@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@
FTP distributions. FTP access must be
anonymous, and no upload/download ratios
are allowed (a ridiculous thing anyway).
- Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must</emphasis>
- never be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
+ Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must never</emphasis>
+ be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
Also the FreeBSD archive should be available under
the path <filename>/pub/FreeBSD</filename>.
</para>
@@ -666,28 +666,25 @@
environment variables, like
<literal>SGML_CATALOG_FILES</literal>.
Also have a look at your <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>
- (copy <filename>/etc/defaults/make.conf</filename> if
+ (copy <filename>/usr/share/examples/etc/make.conf</filename> if
you do not have one), and look at the
<literal>DOC_LANG</literal> variable.
Now you are probably ready to run <command>make</command>
- in you doc directory (<filename>/usr/share/doc</filename>
+ in your doc directory (<filename>/usr/share/doc</filename>
by default) and build the documentation.
Again you need to make it accessible for your web server
and make sure the links point to the right location.
<important>
<para>
The building of the documentation, as well as lots
- of side issues, is documented itself in:
+ of side issues, is documented itself in the
<ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/">fdp-primer</ulink>.
Please read this piece of documentation, especially if you
have problems building the documentation.
</para>
</important>
- <note>
- <para>
- XXX MAYBE THIS CAN BE LINKED FROM WITHIN - NOT USING AN ABSOLUTE URL XXX
- </para>
- </note>
+ <!-- XXX MAYBE THIS CAN BE LINKED FROM WITHIN - NOT USING AN
+ ABSOLUTE URL XXX -->
</para>
</sect3>
</sect2>
@@ -845,7 +842,7 @@
</procedure>
</sect3>
<sect3 id="mirror-where-official">
- <title>I'm an official mirror, what is the right site for me?</title>
+ <title>I am an official mirror, what is the right site for me?</title>
<para>
In general the description in <xref linkend="mirror-where-simple">
still applies. Of course you may want to put some
--- hub.diff ends here ---
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