Date: Mon, 18 Apr 2016 14:27:34 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48667 - head/share/xml Message-ID: <201604181427.u3IERYPO088095@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Mon Apr 18 14:27:33 2016 New Revision: 48667 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48667 Log: Simplify and shorten some of the introductory paragraphs for sections of the website. It is not clear why these are included in the stylesheet rather than being separate and more specific files. Modified: head/share/xml/libcommon.xsl Modified: head/share/xml/libcommon.xsl ============================================================================== --- head/share/xml/libcommon.xsl Mon Apr 18 13:55:20 2016 (r48666) +++ head/share/xml/libcommon.xsl Mon Apr 18 14:27:33 2016 (r48667) @@ -253,11 +253,11 @@ <p>Submissions should be in HTML. In keeping with the spirit of FreeBSD, we prefer user groups that are active and which conduct - their business in public. If you can't find a group near you, - please consider finding other interested individuals near you - through <a - href="http://bsd.meetup.com/">http://bsd.meetup.com/</a>; and - forming your own user group.</p> + their business in public. If there is no local group, + <a + href="http://bsd.meetup.com/">http://bsd.meetup.com/</a>; can + be used to locate interested individuals near by. Consider + forming your own user group!</p> <h3>Regions:</h3> </xsl:template> @@ -453,10 +453,9 @@ <p>FreeBSD is a rapidly developing operating system. Keeping up on the latest developments can be a chore! To keep on top of things, - be sure and check this page periodically. Also, you may wish to - subscribe to the + check this page periodically. News is also announced on the <a href="https://lists.FreeBSD.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-announce">freebsd-announce - mailing list</a> or the <a href="rss.xml">RSS feed</a>.</p> + mailing list</a> and the <a href="rss.xml">RSS feed</a>.</p> <p>The following projects have their own news pages, which should be checked for project specific updates.</p> @@ -470,8 +469,8 @@ see the <a href="&base;/releases/index.html">Release Information</a> page.</p> - <p>For FreeBSD security information and a list of available - Security Advisories, please refer to the + <p>FreeBSD security information and a list of available + Security Advisories are available on the <a href="&base;/security/">Security Information</a> page.</p> </xsl:template> @@ -482,19 +481,18 @@ <!-- template: "html-news-list-press-preface" --> <xsl:template name="html-news-list-press-preface"> - <p>If you know of any news stories featuring FreeBSD that we have - not listed here, please send details to <a - href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a> - so that we can include them.</p> + <p>Please send details of any news stories featuring FreeBSD + to <a + href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org">freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p> </xsl:template> <xsl:template name="html-events-list-preface"> - <p>If you know of any FreeBSD related events, or events that - are of interest for FreeBSD users, which are not listed here, - please send details to <a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org" - >freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>, so they can be included.</p> + <p>Please send details of any FreeBSD related events or events that + are of interest for FreeBSD users which are not listed here + to <a href="mailto:freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org" + >freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org</a>.</p> - <p>Users with organisational software that understands the + <p>Users with organizational software that uses the iCalendar format can subscribe to the <a href="&base;/events/events.ics">FreeBSD events calendar</a> which contains all of the events listed here.</p>
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