Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2003 20:20:21 +0000 From: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net> To: Wes Peters <wes@softweyr.com> Cc: docs@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Did I get this right? Message-ID: <20031112202021.GK60410@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <200311120953.35785.wes@softweyr.com> References: <200311120953.35785.wes@softweyr.com>
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--OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Wed, Nov 12, 2003 at 09:53:35AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote: > I added a section about CUPS, mostly cribbed from the pkg-descr, to the= =20 > handbook printing chapter. I'm pretty fuzzy with doc tools and such,=20 > and therefore need a thorough review. Please have at me over the=20 > attached diff, and thanks in advance. ;^) Hi Wes, Thanks for knocking this together, but just to be cruel I'm going to pick your patch apart - don't let it put you off ;-) > RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.= sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.81 > diff -u -w -u -w -r1.81 chapter.sgml > --- chapter.sgml 5 Nov 2003 10:36:55 -0000 1.81 > +++ chapter.sgml 12 Nov 2003 17:50:17 -0000 > @@ -4585,6 +4585,27 @@ > url=3D"http://www.lprng.org/"></ulink>.</para>; > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > + <varlistentry> > + <term>CUPS</term> > + > + <indexterm><primary>CUPS</primary></indexterm> =20 > + <listitem> > + <para><application>CUPS</application>, the Common UNIX Printing > + System, provides a portable printing layer for UNIX-based > + operating systems. It has been developed by Easy Software ^ Two spaces here please. > + Products to promote a standard printing solution for all UNIX ^^^^ &unix; > + vendors and users.</para> ^ One extra space here, please get rid. There should also be a new line between this <para> and the next. > + <para>CUPS uses the Internet Printing Protocol ("IPP") as the ^^^^^ <acronym>IPP</acronym> > + basis for managing print jobs and queues. The Line Printer ^ Add another space (last time I'll mention this, but it goes for the next occurrence too). > + Daemon ("LPD") Server Message Block ("SMB"), and AppSocket ^^^^^ ^^^^^ <acronym>LPD</acronym>, <acronym>SMB</acronym> > + (a.k.a. JetDirect) protocols are also supported with reduced > + functionality. CUPS adds network printer browsing and > + PostScript Printer Description ("PPD") based printing ^^^^^ <acronym>PPD</acronym> > + options to support real-world printing under UNIX.</para> ^^^^ &unix; > + <para>The main site for <application>CUPS</application> is <ulink > + url=3D"http://www.cups.org/"></ulink>.</para>; ^^ Two extra spaces here. > + </listitem> > + </varlistentry> ^ This whitespace looks funny, but I suspect you're just falling in line with the rest of the file, in which case it's ok. Thanks again, Ceri --=20 --OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/spYFocfcwTS3JF8RAlAZAJ4mgJH4/rcC8+w/8eiGqlIuCsGjbwCfZqoB 5q1wHPinCUCL0l9jhJby+BU= =I9UI -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG--
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