Date: Wed, 22 Dec 2004 10:07:34 +0100 From: Matteo Riondato <rionda@gufi.org> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Explaination of an extract from the handbook Firewall Section Message-ID: <1103706454.84445.6.camel@kaiser.sig11.org> In-Reply-To: <20041221214640.GB1340@gothmog.gr> References: <1103658469.8516.53.camel@kaiser.sig11.org> <20041221214640.GB1340@gothmog.gr>
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--=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > Hi, >=20 > Good catch. The nearby paragraphs use "the foo option _enables_ bar" > for describing kernel options. >=20 > Does the following change make this paragraph easier to understand? >=20 > % Index: chapter.sgml > % =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapt= er.sgml,v > % retrieving revision 1.10 > % diff -u -r1.10 chapter.sgml > % --- chapter.sgml 16 Dec 2004 22:45:35 -0000 1.10 > % +++ chapter.sgml 21 Dec 2004 21:44:11 -0000 > % @@ -245,8 +245,9 @@ > % device pflog > % device pfsync</programlisting> > % > % - <para><literal>device pf</literal> tells the compile to include > % - Packet Filter as part of its core kernel.</para> > % + <para><literal>device pf</literal> enables support for the > % + <quote>Packet Filter</quote> firewall to the resulting > % + kernel.</para> > % > % <para><literal>device pflog</literal> enables the optional > % &man.pflog.4; pseudo network device which can be used to log t= raffic Yes, now it's easier to understand (and translate..). Please note that there are similar obscurities in the IPF section too. (line 372-383 in same file) I would say that the whole firewall chapter is a bit obscure, so I will try to make it clearer and send patches here. Best Regards --=20 Rionda aka Matteo Riondato GUFI Staff Member (http://www.gufi.org) FreeSBIE Developer (http://www.freesbie.org) BSD-FAQ-it Main Developer (http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda) Sent from: kaiser.sig11.org running FreeBSD-6.0-CURRENT --=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: Questa parte del messaggio =?ISO-8859-1?Q?=E8?= firmata -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQBByTlW2Mp4pR7Fa+wRArnNAKCDIexm+fdcLFdbUm50rdAekF3LSQCeK6nt TENdq38o08oBM61pGpn2mAw= =j37n -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv--
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