Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2002 18:46:44 +0000 From: Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/34883: Cleanup of the Developer's Handbook, chapter 1 Message-ID: <E16ahwy-000Hvf-00@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net>
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>Number: 34883
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Cleanup of the Developer's Handbook, chapter 1
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Tue Feb 12 10:50:02 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
>Release: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 7 13:14:41 GMT 2002 setantae@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/RHADAMANTH i386
>Description:
Update some stuff now that /usr/src/crypto has stuff other than DES in it.
Also, fix some typos.
Ceri
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml.old Tue Feb 12 17:25:40 2002
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml Tue Feb 12 18:43:01 2002
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
any other trade. For some it is a hobby, for others it is their
profession. The information in this chapter might be more aimed
towards the beginning programmer, but may also serve to be
- useful for the programmer setting her first steps on the FreeBSD
+ useful for the programmer taking her first steps on the FreeBSD
platform.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
<para>The complete source code to FreeBSD is available from our
public CVS repository. The source code is normally installed in
<filename class=directory>/usr/src</filename> which contains the
- following subdirectories.</para>
+ following subdirectories:</para>
<para>
<informaltable frame="none">
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
<row>
<entry><filename class=directory>crypto/</filename></entry>
- <entry>DES source</entry>
+ <entry>Cryptographical sources</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -150,13 +150,13 @@
<row>
<entry><filename
class=directory>kerberosIV/</filename></entry>
- <entry>Source for Kerbereros version IV</entry>
+ <entry>Source for Kerberos version IV</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry><filename
class=directory>kerberos5/</filename></entry>
- <entry>Source for Kerbereros version 5</entry>
+ <entry>Source for Kerberos version 5</entry>
</row>
<row>
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